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Thursday, September 6, 2007
[Slim] Project one - Cover one - Prototype 2
For prototype 2 I didn't really capture the process because I did everything in Illustrator, and forgot to save revisions as separate files. So all I have is the final rendering.
The thing I hate about this most is that there's not much conceptual thinking behind the way the title is the way it is. About as deep as it gets is that I wanted "a year" to have some size (but since it's really "length", I don't think making the type size bigger really cuts it)
You'll also notice I tried to patch up the huge gap between "a" and "year" with a line... pitiful.
The random kernings need a lot of fine tuning work.
The "lectures and writings by" seems a little too clumped up with "John Cage"...
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The thing I hate about this most is that there's not much conceptual thinking behind the way the title is the way it is. About as deep as it gets is that I wanted "a year" to have some size (but since it's really "length", I don't think making the type size bigger really cuts it)
You'll also notice I tried to patch up the huge gap between "a" and "year" with a line... pitiful.
The random kernings need a lot of fine tuning work.
The "lectures and writings by" seems a little too clumped up with "John Cage"...
Time for another iteration! :)
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