The detail polishing is absent from these as I was more focused on getting the concept executed.
Feedback is very welcome!! Rip it apart guys, c'mon!! :)
Saturday, September 22, 2007
[Slim] Project One - Cover One,Two,Three - Redux
Alright, revamp of the covers based on everything i've learned so far... Tried to retain much of the spirit of the originals where it made sense, and mercilessly removed stuff that was just utter crap... (not that this is that much better)
The detail polishing is absent from these as I was more focused on getting the concept executed.
Feedback is very welcome!! Rip it apart guys, c'mon!! :)
The detail polishing is absent from these as I was more focused on getting the concept executed.
Feedback is very welcome!! Rip it apart guys, c'mon!! :)
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These are interesting.. I'm really digging the second one. At first I thought it was a bit too literal, but I think it works and is fun to look at. I like that it seems very tied to the axial grid, but then breaks it where all the action happens. Not so sure about the "volume two" seems out of place to me, and not integrated with everything else. I'd also like to see it with some color.
As for the others, I'm personally not so into the yellow. It seems faded and weak compared to the strong motions in the text.I feel like in "A Year From Monday" has a lot of different treatments making it hard to read it as a whole.
Roaring Silence...text overall seems a bit open and spacey... sometimes looks painful for those letters :) And the two white boxes stick out a bit too much for me. It looks like you might be trying to repeat the form of the i and l... but it's not obvious to me.
Ok, done ripping :)
I love your comments, Imran!!! Thanks so much!! I gotta do some more color study, tighten things up, and work on the foreground background... Argh!!! :)
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